Kia ora bloggers, here is my writing:
The Dungeon Escape
There was an old figure with silvery hair and a long cane. She was kidnapped and forced to live in the dungeon. Luckily, she was slim and there was a small window above. Before escaping she checked for any sign of the kidnapper. No one was in sight, so she quickly slipped through a small crack in the dungeon.
Then she searched for the Wise Old Wizard to get back home. She looked all around, but all she found was a lush, humongous tree. At the end of an abandoned, winding railway, there was a faint sparkle. Immediately, she knew it was the shine of the Wise Old Wizard. The wizard had a crooked back and a long strip of fluffy, dried paint hanging from his chin. He wore a blue cloak with yellow stars on top and a purple pointed hat.
I found making it descriptive, but ideas were difficult.
Here is my task 4:
Task 4
Imagine you experienced this adventure. Write 2-3 sentences about how you would feel and why. |
I would feel seriously scared because I would hate being stuck in a dungeon and being alone.
I would also feel seriously scared because I had to live in a dungeon for many days.
Another reason is that I’d feel scared because I’d be alone. |
Unfortunately, I haven’t finished the writing.
What do you think could happen next?
Kind Regards Darren